Thursday, March 22, 2007

The First Article



Hello! My name is Iris, and I'm 18 years old.
I study Industrial design in Chang Gung University, and I am in the first grade now.
It's a little difficult for me to study Design, because I haven't learned any thing about it.I don't have much money to buy many materials for my projects, either. At last, my parents want me to study medical and they often told me about not to study design.Even though, I want to try my best and see if I can do will on this area.
I had done Taekwondo in my childhood, it's one of my favorite sports. Besides, I had joined the guitar club in my senior high school, and I like to play the classical guitar. It is really a common and cheap instruments but can make beatiful sounds.
This is my new blog that will be writen by English. To me, English is an uneasy subject. Needless to say, writing articals by English is really a hard work to me. I wish I can keep writting and my English writting skiils can make great strides.

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Writing English diary is a good way to improve your English ability :)

Being an English major, I have the responsibility to provide my suggestions to your paragraphs from time to time.

As a result:
1. I study industrial design
--> I "major" in ~
2. the first year in college
--> I'm a freshman

b9542004iris said...

Thank you a lot!
Actually I don't pay much attention to write these articles. We have too much project to do, so I didn't think a lot when I do this homework. But I will try hard to improve my writtin skill.